જો તેણે…!!!!

By heenaparekh  

ટચલી આંગળી પર

તેને ઊંચક્યું ત્યારે

મને લાગ્યું કે…

…માધવે

ગોવર્ધન ઊંચકીને

મોટી ધાડ નથી મારી!

રાધાની પાંપણ પરનું

એકાદ આંસુ

જો તેણે…!!!!

( નવીન ઢંગટ )

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6 Comments

  1. Bhagvanji
    Posted December 23, 2008 at 5:57 pm | Permalink | Reply

    superb, very nice
    રાધાની પાંપણ પરનું

    એકાદ આંસુ

    જો તેણે…!!!!

    ( નવીન ઢંગટ )

  2. hemant doshi
    Posted December 23, 2008 at 10:29 pm | Permalink | Reply

    what do you writer want to leave poem half way ?
    hemant doshi

  3. Posted December 24, 2008 at 7:38 am | Permalink | Reply

    સુંદર ચમત્કૃતિ !

  4. Posted December 24, 2008 at 9:38 am | Permalink | Reply

    Good One Heena Ben

  5. Posted December 25, 2008 at 9:32 am | Permalink | Reply

    mind blowing POEM !!

  6. aniruddhsinh jhala
    Posted December 30, 2008 at 2:41 pm | Permalink | Reply

    very good,keep it

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